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Mr. Coville,
Is writing smoothsailing or are you ever worried a publisher will not like your books? What is your least favorite part of making a book?
Is writing smoothsailing or are you ever worried a publisher will not like your books? What is your least favorite part of making a book?
hey Bruce!
thanks for the info! i had a feeling that there was a difference between them.
i have another scene description that i would like your opinion on, if you don't mind. the description is of The Fortress of Gul Darrow, which is the necromancer fortress, the only home they have since they were exiled from the Welterr Empire. (the brotherhood members are going into the fortress to rescue a captured brotherhood member!)
The massive high towered fortress of the necromancers loomed up before the brotherhood rescue party, once in a while illuminated by lightning bolts from the surrounding storm. The towers looked like they were made of metal, stone, and wooden support beams, with a large cast iron gate blocking the front entrance embedded into the surrounding wall. Evil looking gargoyles decorated the wall and peered down maliciously at the advancing brotherhood members. A neglected run down drawbridge lead down to the entrance portcullis, which looked like it had been double locked and tightly secured. Goblins and orcs patrolled the surrounding wall, pacing back and forth with weapons drawn. Once in a while the guards would stop and look over the surrounding wall to make sure no one was attempting to break in. A further observation from the keen eyes of the brotherhoods chief spy indicated that each guard was armed with a sword, a spear, or a crossbow. Whenever a guard stopped to look over the wall they would point the weapon over the wall and sweep the area so that no intruders would pass, then they would continue with their patrol. Ghostly moans sounded from inside the massive tower, evidently from the spirits of people who were long dead. Just the sight of this eerie place sent chills down the spine of every adventurer in the advancing rescue party. It became evident that this mission was not going to be as simple as the brotherhood members had hoped.
is this good, or is there more to be added?
thanks a bunch! Byron Lee
P.s. give my best to your wife and your children!
thanks for the info! i had a feeling that there was a difference between them.
i have another scene description that i would like your opinion on, if you don't mind. the description is of The Fortress of Gul Darrow, which is the necromancer fortress, the only home they have since they were exiled from the Welterr Empire. (the brotherhood members are going into the fortress to rescue a captured brotherhood member!)
The massive high towered fortress of the necromancers loomed up before the brotherhood rescue party, once in a while illuminated by lightning bolts from the surrounding storm. The towers looked like they were made of metal, stone, and wooden support beams, with a large cast iron gate blocking the front entrance embedded into the surrounding wall. Evil looking gargoyles decorated the wall and peered down maliciously at the advancing brotherhood members. A neglected run down drawbridge lead down to the entrance portcullis, which looked like it had been double locked and tightly secured. Goblins and orcs patrolled the surrounding wall, pacing back and forth with weapons drawn. Once in a while the guards would stop and look over the surrounding wall to make sure no one was attempting to break in. A further observation from the keen eyes of the brotherhoods chief spy indicated that each guard was armed with a sword, a spear, or a crossbow. Whenever a guard stopped to look over the wall they would point the weapon over the wall and sweep the area so that no intruders would pass, then they would continue with their patrol. Ghostly moans sounded from inside the massive tower, evidently from the spirits of people who were long dead. Just the sight of this eerie place sent chills down the spine of every adventurer in the advancing rescue party. It became evident that this mission was not going to be as simple as the brotherhood members had hoped.
is this good, or is there more to be added?
thanks a bunch! Byron Lee
P.s. give my best to your wife and your children!
I was not aware that Bufo is Latin for toad. You learn something new everyday!
Dear Mr. Coville,
What is your favorite part of being an author? Besides you know writing the books? Does the fame annoy you or are you proud of it?
What is your favorite part of being an author? Besides you know writing the books? Does the fame annoy you or are you proud of it?
The upcoming animated movie Epic...has a talking toad character named Bufo! I just thought that was pretty funny. Jennifer's Bufo has been around since 1993 but I am sure some people will think YOU copied Epic. I have seen it happen with other writers. I hope it won't happen to you.
dear mr.bruce thanks for all the books you wrote i enjoyed my teachers an alein and im starting to read the unicorn chronicles and the dragonslayers and the worlds worst fairygod mother i think i will like those books i really enjoy reading because its the only way to get out of reality is to go into my fantasy world of books right now im reading a book called delerium its a good book maybe you could give the book a try i think its a good book so far hope you visit riverview jr high or high school some day enjoy your weekend it is friday im gonna go home and read sorry for all the typos and lack of puncturation sincerly shanandra
How many books have you written
On my teacher is a alien how did mr smith breath the air on earth or is it the same air they breath were there planet is.
What would you different if you could write "my teacher is an alien" again
How did you become a author? Have you wanted to be one since you was a little kid?